Direct Mail Examples for B2B: 7 Pieces Written in Full

Seven B2B mail pieces printed in full, from a one-finding letter to a small parcel, and what to change before you post your own.

Robbert Veer, Founder

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Most direct mail examples online are photos of big consumer campaigns. This page prints seven B2B pieces in full, as a web design or marketing agency would post them to a local business owner. The simplest is a one-page letter that names one problem on the owner's website, says what it costs and asks for ten minutes. All seven are made up.

Copy the structure and replace the finding. A finding only works when it is true for the business that opens the envelope. Our guide to direct mail for agencies explains why the letter goes out before any email.

What makes a direct mail example worth copying?

You could post it on Monday. That one test removes most of what ranks for this search.

The galleries show brand stunts, scratch-off cards and pop-up mailers from large consumer brands. An agency of three people with a list of 60 roofers cannot use any of them. A useful example passes three tests.

  1. The full text is on the page. The wording is the work, and a description of a mail piece leaves it out.
  2. It goes to one owner, by name. B2B mail to a local business is a letter between two people.
  3. It costs a stamp and ten minutes. Nothing to design, nothing to die-cut.

The first six on this page pass all three. The seventh is a parcel. It costs more than a stamp, so it goes to a short list only.

#ExampleFormatGoes toBuilt on
1The one-finding letterOne-page letterA cold prospectA phone number nobody can tap
2The search-result letterOne-page letterA cold prospectHow the firm looks in a Google search
3The enclosure letterLetter and one printoutA cold prospectA menu that cannot be read on a phone
4The reviews letterOne-page letterA cold prospectReviews that never reach the website
5The anniversary postcardPostcardA past clientThe age of the site you built
6The handwritten noteNote cardSomeone you metSomething they told you
7The stopwatch parcelSmall parcelA short list of top prospectsA slow home page

Seven B2B direct mail examples, written in full

Every business, person, phone number and web address in this section is made up. The first four are direct mail letter examples for cold prospects. The last three cover a past client, a new acquaintance and a short list of top prospects.

1. The one-finding letter

A web design studio writes to a roofer it has never spoken to.

Dear Mr. Calloway,

I opened Calloway Roofing's website on my phone on Tuesday. The phone number at the top is a picture, so tapping it does nothing. A homeowner with a leak has to write your number down and dial it by hand.

Some of them will call the next roofer on the list instead.

I run Ridgeline Web Studio here in Tulsa. We build websites for trades, and I have written down three changes I would make to yours first.

May I show you? It takes ten minutes. My direct line is 555-0134. I will also email you on Thursday.

Kind regards,
Tom Avery
Ridgeline Web Studio, ridgelineweb.example

Why it is built this way. The owner can test the finding in five seconds with the phone in his pocket. Two sentences cover the studio, and the rest is about the roofer.

2. The search-result letter

An SEO consultant writes to a family law firm.

Dear Ms. Okafor,

Last week I searched "family lawyer Chandler" the way a new client would. Okafor Family Law came up on the second page. The title of the result reads "Home", and the description under it is your cookie notice.

Your firm has 96 Google reviews at 4.9 stars. The three firms above you have fewer.

I am an SEO consultant in Chandler. I have listed the first five pages I would change and what each one should say.

I would be glad to send that list or walk you through it. You can reach me at 555-0158 or dana@hartsearch.example.

Sincerely,
Dana Hart

Why it is built this way. It shows the owner her firm through a client's eyes. The compliment in the second paragraph makes the problem feel unfair instead of embarrassing.

3. The enclosure letter

A web designer writes to a restaurant owner and adds one printed page.

Dear Mr. Benedetti,

The sheet behind this letter is your menu page as it looks on a phone. I circled one thing. The menu is a PDF, and on a phone the type is too small to read without pinching.

People choosing where to eat tonight look at the menu first. If it is hard to read, some will open the next restaurant's.

I design websites for restaurants in Sacramento. Turning that PDF into a page that reads well on a phone is a two-day job.

Call me on 555-0171 if you would like to see how it could look. I will also email you early next week.

Best regards,
Lena Ruiz
Tableside Web, tablesideweb.example

Why it is built this way. The printout is the proof, so the letter stays short. One circle is enough. Ten would read as an attack.

4. The reviews letter

A marketing agency writes to a heating and cooling company.

Dear Ms. Lindgren,

Lindgren Heating & Air has 212 Google reviews, and nearly all of them are five stars. I read your website twice and could not find one.

A homeowner comparing three companies sees those reviews on Google and then lands on a site that never mentions them. The proof you earned is doing half its job.

I run a small marketing agency in Boise. Putting your best reviews on the home page and the quote page is an afternoon's work.

I have marked up a printout of your home page to show where each one would go. May I send it over? My number is 555-0126.

Regards,
Priya Nair
Northfork Marketing, northforkmarketing.example

Why it is built this way. The finding is good news. The owner did the hard part, and the letter offers to finish it.

5. The anniversary postcard

A studio writes to a client whose site it built four years ago. The front of the card reads "Your website turned 4 this month."

Hi Marcus,

We launched harborviewdental.example four years ago this month. Phones, browsers and Google have all changed since then.

I have set aside 30 minutes to go through the site and send you one page on what still works and what needs attention. No charge.

Want it? Call 555-0109 or email sam@copperline.example.

Sam, Copperline Studio

Why it is built this way. A past client knows you, so a postcard is enough. The anniversary gives you a reason to write that is about their site.

6. The handwritten note

An agency owner writes to a clinic manager she met at a chamber of commerce breakfast.

Dear Angela,

Good to meet you at the chamber breakfast on Thursday. You said most new patients find the clinic through a neighbor and almost none through the website.

I had a look that evening. The site never says which insurance plans you accept, and that is the first thing I would want to know.

If a second pair of eyes would help, I am on 555-0193.

Warmly,
Chris

Why it is built this way. It repeats something she said, which proves the note was written for her. It asks for nothing and leaves a number.

7. The stopwatch parcel

A web studio posts a small box to the 15 car dealers it most wants as clients. Inside are a cheap stopwatch and this card.

Dear Mr. Petrov,

Press the button on the stopwatch and open petrovauto.example on your phone. Stop it when you can read your opening hours.

When I tried, it showed just over seven seconds.

I build fast websites for car dealers around Columbus. I have a short list of what slows yours down, starting with the 14 full-size photos on the home page.

Keep the stopwatch. If you would like the list, I am on 555-0147.

Yours,
Maria Santos
Greenlight Web, greenlightweb.example

Why it is built this way. The object makes the owner run the test himself. A parcel costs many times what a letter costs, so it goes to a short list only. Our post on lumpy mail covers when an object earns its postage.

What do the seven have in common?

One finding, one cost in the owner's terms and one small ask. None describes the sender for more than two sentences.

  • They open with the reader. Each one reaches the reader's own business, or the reader's own words, within two sentences.
  • The finding can be checked in a minute. The owner picks up a phone and sees it.
  • The cost is plain. A missed call, an unread menu, a client who picks another firm. No jargon and no scores.
  • They are short. The seven run from 55 to 115 words, signature included.
  • The ask is small. Ten minutes, a list, a second pair of eyes. Every piece carries a phone number.

What should you change before you post one?

Change the finding. It has to be true today for the business that opens the envelope.

A finding copied from this page will be wrong for your prospect, and a wrong finding is worse than none. Look for your own in five places.

Where to lookWhat you might findUsed in
Their site on your own phoneButtons that do not work, slow pages, text too small to readExamples 1, 3 and 7
A Google search for their service and townTheir position, and how the result describes themExample 2
Their Google reviews next to their siteProof that never reaches the websiteExample 4
Your own client listLaunch dates and old projectsExample 5
A conversationSomething they said in their own wordsExample 6

By hand, this takes minutes for each business. Leadodo's AI, Twip, does it for a whole search. It scores every website out of 100 across 10 domains, and its findings become the opening line of each letter. You can see how Twip scores a site.

Does naming the problem help? We have tested that for email only. Across 3,570 cold emails to Dutch companies, businesses with the weakest 20% of websites replied positively 1.60% of the time to a generic email and 2.35% of the time when the email named the problem. The gap was not statistically significant, with p = 0.238, so read it as a hint. The test says nothing about letters. The details are in our write-up.

What happens after the mail lands?

An email follows about three days later, and it refers to the letter. A mail piece with nothing behind it wastes the attention it earned.

Your Outbound Machine in Leadodo runs this as six steps over 19 working days. A posted letter arrives on day 1, emails follow on days 4, 7 and 11, and LinkedIn comes on days 15 and 19. The sequence stops for a business the moment it replies. You can run the same order by hand with a calendar.

That first email can open with "I posted you a letter last week." Our cold email follow-up templates include one built on that line.

Questions

What counts as direct mail?

Direct mail is any physical piece sent by post to a named person or address to start or continue a business relationship. Letters, postcards, catalogs, handwritten notes and parcels all count. For a first contact with a business owner, a letter in an envelope is the usual choice.

Do letters or postcards work better for B2B?

It depends on who receives them. In the ANA's Response Rate Report 2021, letter-sized envelopes gave marketers the best return on prospect lists, at 112%, and postcards gave the best return on house lists, at 92% (ANA). Those are return on investment figures from 2021, and the report gives no response rates. Our guide to postcard marketing compares the two formats.

How long should a direct mail letter be?

One page. The four prospect letters on this page run from 104 to 115 words, signature included. That is enough for one finding, one cost, two sentences about you and one ask.

Can I use these examples as they are?

No. The businesses and the findings are made up, and a finding that is false for your prospect will cost you the conversation. Keep the order of the paragraphs and write your own first paragraph. For more starting points, see our sample sales letters.


Next step. See how your Outbound Machine posts the letter and runs the email and LinkedIn steps after it. Outbound Machine.

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